Finnlee

//Fizzle is a combination of a// __//Colour://__ //Zebra stripes on its head and body colour of a tiger.And leg colour blue// // __Head__: A pony // // __Legs__: Big as frog legs that can hold the body. // // __Body__: Turtle // //Speed of a c////heetah//
 * __Fizzle__**

//This story is of Fizzle the Alien from Planet Weird.// //On Funky Friday Fizzle's space ship crashed at boulevard Hall. Really Melville club.// //It was a hot blazing, but gental breeze day when Fizzle landed on the boulevard hall.There were 100's of people playing bowls until ,BOOM,4:27 Fizzle crashed while people were playing bowls.You could see in peoples eyes that they were shocked.As soon as Fizzle jumped out of the ship,aaahhhhh, the people screamed,with fright.Fizzle was scared him self he has never seen anything like earth or human beans.Fizzle was no ordinary creature he was the most ugliest creature that you would ever see.Fizzle walked away from his ship and shrolled across the streets after the big catastrophe//

An interesting start to your story Finnlee. Keep going - I can't wait to see what happens to Fizzle. Check the spelling of __cheater__ ??