Brandon

On __Mars__ the __space__ alien it was fast and had and tail was a fox tail an had a panthers head an its legs was a leopard His __stomach__

//Brandon, you need to go back over your story and proof-read it;// //- what sort of word is __mars__ ? It needs something at the beginning.// //- look at the words I have underlined __and it__, __and it's__ __and its__ - can you think of a way to change from using these same words all the time?// //- look at those words again (underlined) - it, it's, its - what sort of words are these? What does the apostrophe do?// //- check spelling//